In the first essay that I have written this semester, I learned quite a few largely-important points about writing. Before this class, I knew very little about any writing method. The first essay taught me the incredible importance of a thesis. Without a thesis, a paper cannot accomplish anything; it becomes nothing more than rambling nonsense. Another important thing that the first essay taught me was comma placement. I have always struggled with comma placement. This essay helped me to understand it a lot more than I previously did.
The second essay that I have written for this class, the profile essay, was my favorite essay this semester. I believe that this essay was a major turning-point for me in my abilities as a writer. While working on this essay I learned the power of "showing" through words, instead of "telling." This essay also helped me to increase my knowledge of punctuation use; specifically, the semicolon. In my previous essay, my over-use of the semicolon ran rampant. For reasons unknown to me, I detested short sentences. In an attempt to lengthen many, I through semicolon after semicolon into my essay. Fortunately, I out-grew this habit before writing my second essay and I am thankful for that.
The weaker of my two essays would definitely be the first. I'm personally a bit disappointed with my first essay, the personal narative. I chose a difficult topic and it fell short in the defense of the thesis. If I could edit one portion of the essay, I would re-write a portion from paragraph 6.
Some choose to home-school because they want to be more involved in their child's education, some choose to home-school in order to alleviate the peer pressure of other children, some choose to so that their child can learn at his own pace, whether it be faster or slower than average.
This portion features an incredibley long run-on sentence. At the time, being my first essay, I didn't realize how terrible this run-on was. Looking back now, I can see how painfully obvious it is. I would re-write it as such:
Some parents want to be more involved in their child's...